Robert M Scanlon (Westland)

When I started playing this Movie on my computer, my wife walked into the room with my 16 year old son. I told them the title of the movie I was about to watch " I think my Facebook Friend is Dead". They got curious so they decided to watch with me for a few minutes. That few minutes turned into the entire movie length. My 16 year old couldn't wait to tell all his friends about the movie. My wife thought it was very good. She made the comment that it was on the order of the "Hang Over". That's a big complement if you knew my wife. She doesn't sit still for many things.

"The Hangover" ? I started thinking, was this on the order of that movie? I say yes, very close it just needs a few tweaks.

* The Dmario and his two thugs needed to be just a little more scary.
We needed to see a little more from Dmario . Just enough to keep it mysterious, but to make it clear how dangerous his is.
During the Cross Dresser escape scene, maybe add a twist with a couple of very large cross dressers 6-7 or better that take a liking to the two thugs.

* The End scene was too easy to get to. It needed to be a little more scary and funny. Maybe Dmario knew our heroes were coming setting a few traps along the way for them.

The Characters were all very likable. The Actors and Actresses did a great job with them. If we have not heard of their names before this. We will in the near future. They all have talent and were able to be the characters portrayed to the fullest. They kept our attention.


I believe this will be a Blockbuster smash. The timing is good to have movie with this subject matter. This movie needs to get it's final tweaks done and released out to theatres. Don't wait too much longer to release it. Make Money, Act now!

I love the continuous action. This keeps the audience interested. You are definately on the right track. The only thing this story needs is a little more character building to help the audience step into the characters shoes. Maybe a scene or two more that helps develope why the main characters are reacting the way they are to situations. I am looking foward to seeing " Rayfield Scott" in theatres. I love westerns. Good luck.

The basic structure of the script is good. It just needs a little more action and excitement.
This could be achieved with more awkward to shocking situational scenes sprinkled in to keep the audience's interest throughout. Great job with the project. I can see the effort and time put into Small change. All that you will need is the right contacts in the future. It is easy to see that the talent is there.

Of the Movies that have been uploaded to this site, Refuge has been presented the best. Their are some lighting issues but overall it is easy to see how much time and effort was put into this project. I wish you good luck with "Refuge", and may you gain the right contacts for you efforts.