A list of my award-winning works.
(Drama, Action and Adventure) After years of gritty undercover work is ruined and his father murdered, a brash young narcotics officer seeks revenge on the k...
(Science Fiction and Fantasy, Kids and Family) A young girl fights to make it home after she is trapped in a magic realm where childhoods are stolen by an evil king and no on...
(Comedy, Action and Adventure) Before James Bond, there was Benjamin Franklin: inventor, philanthropist, and the single largest exporter of kicking British as...
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Finalist: Script Spotlight: America's Ben Franklin Punch-Up
Semifinalist: Script Spotlight: America's Ben Franklin Punch-Up
America’s Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String T.N.'s 1st Draft (Script 95) |
31
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No rating
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01/31/12
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Semifinalist: Best Script
The Great Kingdom T.N.'s 3rd Draft (Script 3) |
6
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No rating
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12/31/11
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Writer
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Semifinalist: Best Kids and Family Script
The Great Kingdom T.N.'s 2nd Draft (Script 2) |
12
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No rating
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11/30/11
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Writer
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Everfail, The Hero T.N.'s Original Draft (Script 1) |
5
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4.0 stars
(1)
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11/30/11
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Writer
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When Pigs Fly T.N.'s Original Draft (Script 1) |
5
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No rating
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11/30/11
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Writer
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Semifinalist: Best Script
Dead Set T.N.'s Original Draft (Script 1) |
36
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3.0 stars
(1)
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11/30/11
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Everything except music (amazon studios provided music tracks),
Actor, Uploader |
The Great Kingdom Trailer 1 - Animated |
107
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3.5 stars
(2)
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10/31/11
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Writer
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Semifinalist: Best Script
The Great Kingdom T.N.'s Original Draft (Script 1) |
27
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4.0 stars
(3)
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10/23/11
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(Comedy, Action and Adventure) Donnie Clark
(Comedy, Kids and Family) Rob Gardner
(Science Fiction and Fantasy, Kids and Family) Justin Sloan
After I finished, there were still a few unanswered questions that nagged at me (sent you studio mail with my detailed notes), but all in all, the twists and turns kept me guessing and I enjoyed much of the time spent with the local police in Baird. Your characters were colorful, but I really wish I had seen more emotion/reactions from your protagonist (especially earlier on). Also, I'd like you to give us a little more of Bobby Jo and Harper interacting with each other. Show more of their history and banter, etc.
I'd also like to see the lack of media attention addressed a little earlier in the script. It had been bothering me for probably 10 or 20 pages before it was mentioned.
Keep track of how much time has elapsed between events. I'd tighten up your time frame for the longer-term events (two weeks since Brooke's disappearance seemed too long).
A very interesting read for me. Not my usual genre, and considering that, excellent job holding my attention!
I'd post more here, but I don't want to give the story away and I already sent you the ridiculously long full notes (sorry I wrote so much). I hope you find them useful. :) Good job.