Review my short film script
You have a passive logline... should be more like...
People with secrets struggle to overcome a hacker who blackmails them
After a hacker is brutally bludgeoned to death,Officer o'Malley enters a gritty world of secrets
from which the only escape is too horrible to visualize
As I recall from those VHS covers,whats on the cover (logline) is not always what
you got on the tape(script)
your project is not public lol