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A Participant says:
Looking for objective story notes on SCREWDRIVER. Willing to trade notes for notes.

NOTES: I know the newscast is missing from the brothel scene. Also, the script moved straight to deciding so AS has likely already passed. It's dark stuff. Just looking for a fresh pair of eyes before a rewrite and posting it to Inktip.
A Participant says:
Oops. The link: https://studios.amazon.com/projects/152082
Mj Bodhi,

From reading just the first page, I can see that you're a talented writer... but the subject matter... to disturbing for me. I'm definitely not your audience. But if you write something else (not as dark), and post it, I'd be interested in reading. Good luck and take care.
too, not to:)
A Participant says:
No worries. I get it. Disturbing stuff.

I'll be posting less dark stuff in the future. Thanks. :)
Hi MJ!
I was looking for something like this, I'm also a horror screenplay writer, I'm going to read it and get back to you here as soon as I finish it.

All the best,
Wensley.
A Participant says:
Cool. If you have something you'd like me to read and give notes let me know.
A Participant says:
Thanks anyway, everybody. Take it easy.

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