Hi, guys. I was wondering if you wouldn't mind reading my most recent Drama, "Tapping". It's my third feature screenplay, and I would like some thoughts.
Po (18) drops his bag on the floor as he enters. (we already know it's the living room)
In the room, a T.V., 2 rugged sofas and an armchair that should've been replaced years ago. Dingy bare walls with black sharpie markings all over. (you don't say what king of mark so I made it up).
Po throws himself on a sofa and turns on the T.V.
What do you mean 'he sits down?' You have to say. And be brief. It's not a novel.