51st State: Northern Virginia

Creator: Nick Stockton
Age rating: 13 and older
Join the team from Lockbox Security in the 51st state (Northern Virginia) as they deal with life, cyber hacking, liberty, and the pursuit of making the Internet safe … for more cat videos !!!

Latest Work

  • Pilot Script 11 - Penetration Testing; Hail and Farewell; Black Orchids - Update 11
    06/24/16
    Creative Notes:
    Applied a three act structure to the script. Smoothed out character references. Added additional dialog.
    Logline:
    The company is going through testing to have the ability to bid on new work. Ryan gets ready for his "Hail and Farewell" party. Liz gets an unexpected gift.

All Work

  • Pilot Script 10 - Penetration Testing; Hail and Farewell; Black Orchids - Update 10
    06/12/16
    Creative Notes:
    This is a revision adds additional details about Ryan's REALLY bad commute, which unfortunately is common for the Washington Metro region. Also, additional details about Greg's price for being "Benedict Arnold" and selling out "Lockbox Security" If your'e looking for a comedy which is "smart, original, funny, character-driven, and have well-defined worlds ", then this is the one.
    Logline:
    The team from "Lockbox Security" are in the middle of testing. If they don't pass, they can't bet on new work. Ryan goes through the "Hail and Farewell" ceremony. Liz gets a gift from a rival, which changes the tone of the race for new work.
  • Pilot Script 9 - Penetration Testing; Hail and Farewell; Black Orchids - Update 9
    06/04/16
    Creative Notes:
    Re-wrote several sections. Applied new outline to story to make it readable. Created new H & F scene for Mo, Unauthorized computer access scene added.
    Logline:
    In the pilot episode, Cheryl, Ryan, Mo, Debbie, and Chris get ready for "penetration testing" and Ryan goes to Chris and Debbie for help with the "Hail and Farewell" party; Liz gets an unexpected gift.
  • Pilot Script 8 - Penetration Testing; Hail and Farewell; Black Orchids - Update 8
    06/02/16
    Creative Notes:
    Reduced Action blocks and TITLE OVER.
    Logline:
    In the pilot episode, Cheryl, Ryan, Mo, Debbie, and Chris get ready for "penetration testing" and Ryan goes to Chris and Debbie for help with the "Hail and Farewell" party; Liz gets an unexpected gift.
  • Pilot Script 7 - Penetration Testing; Hail and Farewell; Black Orchids - Update 7
    05/31/16
    Creative Notes:
    Added TITLE OVER in front section to cover the real life definition of "Penetration Testing".
    Logline:
    In the pilot episode, Cheryl, Ryan, Mo, Debbie, and Chris get ready for "penetration testing" and Ryan goes to Chris and Debbie for help with the "Hail and Farewell" party; Liz gets an unexpected gift.
  • Pilot Script 6 - Penetration Testing; Hail and Farewell; Black Orchids - Update 6
    05/28/16
    Creative Notes:
    Removed cursing in order to widen audience, normalized names capitalization throughout the script, and reviewed dialog.
    Logline:
    In the pilot episode, Cheryl, Ryan, Mo, Debbie, and Chris get ready for "penetration testing" and Ryan goes to Chris and Debbie for help with the "Hail and Farewell" party; Liz gets an unexpected gift.
  • Pilot Script 5 - Penetration Testing - Update 5
    05/25/16
    Creative Notes:
    Removed "dog napping" story, changed around sections of the script for improved readability, improved Liz's speech to Cheryl at the end of the episode, added "internal theft" scene at the front to tie in the scene at OneCyberGlobal at the end.
    Logline:
    In the pilot episode, everyone is undergoing "penetration testing" (I.e. trying not to let non-company people sneak in); Ryan asks for help with his "Hail and Farewell" speech, Liz gets an unexpected gift.
  • Pilot Script 4 - Penetration Testing - Update 4
    05/23/16
    Creative Notes:
    Tried to rearrange action sequences for better flow. Added betrayal scene at end for better next episode hook. Dog Rescue in the front. Added section of black orchids from OneCyberGlobal
    Logline:
    In the pilot episode; the team is watching over their shoulders as "penetration testing" enters its second week, Ryan worries about his "Hail and Farewell" party, and Liz gets an unexpected gift
  • Pilot Script 3 - Penetration Testing - Update 3
    05/21/16
    Creative Notes:
    Added more details surrounding the penetration testing in the middle of the story. Brought in bigger hook at the end of the story for Greg's character development. Added "Hail and Farewell" party towards end of script to tie everything together. Reduced some action blocks and added "flash backs" to previous "Hail and Farewell" parties
    Logline:
    In the pilot episode, Cheryl, Ryan, Mo, Debbie, and Chris get ready for "penetration testing" and Ryan is wondering how badly he will be embarrassed at the company's " Hail and Farewell" party.
  • Pilot Script 2 - Penetration Testing - Update 2
    05/18/16
    Creative Notes:
    The action statements have been reduced, the dialog runs better, and there is "hook" for the next episode.
    Logline:
    In the pilot episode, Cheryl, Ryan, Mo, Debbie, and Chris get ready for "penetration testing" and Ryan goes to Debbie for help with his love life.
  • Pilot Script 1 - Penetration Testing
    05/14/16
    Creative Notes:
    If you are looking for a comedy which is "smart, original, funny, character-driven, and have well-defined worlds ", then this is the one. Even though the legislators are in Washington D.C, the folks who implement their decisions are in Northern Virginia (or NoVA ... which also means "No Go" in Spanish). Give it a read, send me your comments, but I think there is a place for this show on Amazon.
    Logline:
    In the pilot episode, Cheryl, Ryan, Mo, Debbie, and Chris get ready for "penetration testing" and Ryan goes to Debbie for help with his love life.