MY DAR DREAMS

Creator: tony Clements
Age rating: 17 and older
Our story begins in the year 2008 in Green Forest City a city in the USA a city similar to new york but not as big. as two police officers began their patrol in green forest  city one of the officers being new to the Green Forest Police Department decides it's best to sit
Synopsis: Our story begins in the year 2008 in Green Forest City a city in the USA a city similar to new york but not as big. as two police officers began their patrol in green forest  city one of the officers being new to the Green Forest Police Department decides it's best to sit and remain silent as his new partner an older officer decides it's best to break silents And he started the conversation by talking  about all the new recruits of the police force  the older officer looks at his new partner and said.

officer 1 :
"Man, did you see all the new recruits today? which reminds me today's your first day on the job is it not rookie?"

officer 2 :
"Yes it is and I do have a perfectly good name and it's Jim so if you want in mind can you please use it.

officer 1 :
"Well, since your name isn't Tom, you can call me Jerry."

Jim :
"and Thank you, Jerry I was really nervous since today is my first day on the job old-timer."

Jerry :
no problem Jim it's a pleasure helping one of the new recruits out on their first day on the job

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The two officers then share a laugh. Just then over the CB radio, the dispatcher called 10-10, Fight in progress at a nearby house in Jim and Jerry's location Jerry picks up the CB radio and replies.

Jerry :
"10 4 dispatches this is car 22 we're on our way

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2.

The two police officers stood outside the house next to the door of the house the door was slightly open and the two police officers rang the doorbell and knocked on the side of the door to alert the owner of the house and to know that there was someone outside every time they would knock or ring the doorbell they say it's the police open the door we have come to check For Any disturbance Finally after five minutes of knocking and ringing The doorbell the two police officers began to walk inside as they slowly approach the living room. They notice a body laying on the floor right away the JIM walked slowly over TO the body HE kneels over the body wondering what happened the rookie officer checked for a pulse BUT there was no pulse JIM QUICKLY JUMPS AND YELLS!

Jim :
"Jerry he has no pulse quick we got to call this in!"

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As Jim ran outside to call in the dead body Jerry began looking around the house for any signs of anybody that might have been in there, JERRY reaches a back room feeling as if somebody is following him Jerry reached for his gun but when turns AROUND he finds a mirror on the wall and then take his hand off his gun and proceeded to search the rest of the house after searching the house and discovering nothing Jerry went back to the dead body. After waiting for 15 minutes outside Jim was finally greeted by Detective Tony, Detective Tony stepped out of his car and said.

detective Tony Prime :
"SO are you the one who radioed in the dead body?"

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detective Tony Prime could see that the rookie Jim was nervous because he did not believe that he was standing in front of one of the greatest detectives, then detective Tony asked again.

detective Tony Prime :
"are you the one who radioed in the dead body?"

Jim :
"Yes, sir I was the one who called in the dead body."

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Detective Tony looked at the rookie Jim, and he could tell that the rookie was trying to hold back his excitement, Detective Tony said.

detective Tony Prime :
" where is the dead body?"

3.

Jim :
"Yes, it's right in this house  sir."

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As Jim showed, detective Tony to the dead body as soon as detective Tony got into the house he noticed several lacerations marks around the neck then Tony turned to Jim and said.

detective Tony Prime :
"Jim head out to my police vehicle and get me my camera and the crime scene tape from the back of my car this is a murder."
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As Jim ran out to the car Then Jerry turn to Detective Tony and said

Jerry :
wait for a second detective Tony how can you be so sure this is a murder what if this was an accident

detective Tony Prime :
now Jerry I know you've been on the police force longer than I have old friend but this was no accident nor was it suicide it's simple if you take a look at these lacerations around his neck you can easily tell then a small yet thin piece of wire maybe piano or fishing line was used to strangle him.

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Jerry looks to see what detective Tony was saying he couldn't believe his eyes of all the years he's been on the police force and never once did he tell what was the murder weapon, but by looking at the laceration marks on the bodies neck it was something like the piano wire or fishing line. The marks were easy to spot and the cut into the skin and there are small drops of blood on his fingers, and then Jerry asks Detective Tony.

Jerry :
"Does that mean the victim knew his attacker?"

detective Tony Prime :
" He didn't know his attacker. But I can see why you ask me that it doesn't look like there was any sort of struggle here but if you look closely there are two shoe imprints embedded into the rug here. "

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Jerry looks down at the rug and notices that there were two large shoe prints deeply embedded into the rug that he."

4.

Jerry :
"Why would he let his attacker in?"

detective Tony Prime :
"most likely because the attacker looks like somebody that was either hurt or lost."

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Then detective Tony Started to examine the person that was killed then Tony began thinking to himself out loud.

detective Tony Prime :
"this man must have had a lot of strength."

Jerry :
"detective Tony how did you come to that conclusion?"

detective Tony Prime :
"huh, what are you talking about?"

Jerry :
"you just said that the person who did this had to be very strong."

detective Tony Prime :
Oh, I'm sorry Jerry I was just thinking out loud and making an observation to the two big footprints embedded in the carpet here.

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Just then Jim came back with the camera and crime scene tape then detective Tony Told Jim and Jerry to dust for fingerprints and look for clues and take pictures as Tony stepped outside to place crime tape around the outside of the house Detective Tony begin scratching the back of his head and begins to think to himself.

detective Tony Prime :
Why do I feel like I'm being watched? Or am I just being paranoid?

Then detective Tony begin to look around feeling as if he was being watched Detective Tony headed back into the house As Detective Tony made his way back to the living room Jerry was standing at the entrance with a piece of paper in his hand and then Jerry said.

jerry
detective Tony I found a piece of paper I think it's a poem.

He handed Detective Tony the piece of paper with the poem on it detective Tony begin to read it and Jerry was right it was a poem as Detective Tony read the poem out loud it said roses are red violets are blue I leave this clue just for you this one was lots of fun now what should I do? I know I'll make round two.

jerry
"detective Tony what does this mean?"

Jim
"detective Tony what does this mean?"

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