Secrets From Within

Genres: Drama
Age rating: 17 and older
FBI Agents Kina Ramirez & daughter Sofia lead a top-secret covert task force, created by POTUS Victoria Kelley and they, along with 5 other FBI Agents, are tasked with finding the leader of The Council of Justice, after they bomb the White House, killing over 2,000 people.

Latest Work

  • Pilot Script 6
    02/08/18
    Creative Notes:
    A lot.... I can't pinpoint every single thing I revised because I don't have enough characters to do so, but all I can say is that a lot has changed... Characters added in... Characters taken out.... Many characters names being changed...
    Logline:
    President of the United States, Victoria Kelley assembles a special team of FBI Agents to help her in a top-secret covert mission: Find the leader of the Council of Justice.

All Work

  • Pilot Script 5
    01/29/18
    Creative Notes:
    Added the man that Raquel has been yelling at over the phone, show up at the burning warehouse and beats her down, wanting to know where their kid is.
    Logline:
    President of the United States, Victoria Kelley assembles a special team of FBI Agents to help her in a top-secret covert mission: Find the leader of the Council of Justice.
  • Pilot Script 4 - Goldenrod Revision -- 01/28/18
    01/28/18
    Creative Notes:
    Changed Kina Ramirez to Brooklyn Taylor. Changed Victoria Kelley to Kina Ramirez. Changed Sofia Ramirez to Sofia Taylor. Changed Lowell Shofner to Charles Bannon. Changed Brooke Hurst to Victoria Kelley. Added Randall threatening Sofia with him firing her and arresting the whole task force if she agrees to join the force. Changed the ending scene with Randall arresting everyone on the task force.
    Logline:
    President of the United States, Victoria Kelley assembles a special team of FBI Agents to help her in a top-secret covert mission: Find the leader of the Council of Justice.
  • Pilot Script 3 - Third Full Re-Write -- Revision 01/20/18
    01/22/18
    Creative Notes:
    Changed "Catherine" to "Kina." Added a romantic (sexual) relationship between Sofia and Harrison. Added a pre-series abusive relationship between Raquel and her (unseen) boyfriend or husband, Alex. Added why she left him and took their daughter with her. Added a short, brief teasing sex scene between Sofia and Harrison. I also changed the logline.
    Logline:
    FBI Agents Kina Ramirez & daughter Sofia lead a top-secret covert task force, created by POTUS Victoria Kelley and they, along with 5 other FBI Agents, are tasked with finding the leader of The Council of Justice, after they bomb the White House, killing over 2,000 people.
  • Pilot Script 2 - -- Third Full Re-Write - 01/10/18
    01/19/18
    Creative Notes:
    I had re-wrote the entire script. I have kept several scenes the same. The TEASER will go from the PRESENT DAY to a FEW DAYS IN THE PAST, showing Victoria and Brooke's inauguration day. ACT ONE will take place A FEW DAYS BEFORE THE EXPLOSION; showing the days leading up to the EXPLOSION. ACTS TWO, THREE and FOUR will follow the events after the explosion, from Victoria assembling the task force.
    Logline:
    President of the United States, Victoria Kelley assembles a top-secret covert task force of FBI Agents to help her find the leader of the Council of Justice after they bomb the White House, killing over 2,000 people and nearly killing her.
  • Pilot Script 1 - 2nd Goldenrod Revision -- 9/27/17
    12/28/17
    Creative Notes:
    I have submitted this script many times in the past but always removed it because it was never accepted. This time, I have made a substantial amount of revisions and am hopeful that this is the script that will make the cut!
    Logline:
    President of the United States, Victoria Kelley assembles a special team of FBI Agents to help her in a top-secret covert mission: Find the leader of the Council of Justice.