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Vampire fan's delight.

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4 stars
 
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October 15, 2011
I read the first draft but didn't review it at the time. This third draft is far superior. The many characters are well developed - even those written in only to be killed off later on. The relationships are believable, especially between Jami and Eric, even though Jami does seem to get over Mark perhaps a bit too quickly.

There is plenty of gory action mixed with enough surprises to keep any vampire fan happy throughout; and the buildup of a full blown vampire nightmare for the world is done well.

The premise is nothing new to fans of the genre, but it is well thought out and pretty close to reaching its full potential. It will not disappoint.
 
2 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

Vampires - do they win this time?

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4 stars
 
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October 01, 2011
Many vampire scripts, in this one it's the vampire characters that grow in power.

Many interesting turns, pieces of bodies in sheets - still alive.

Some characters you expect may become main characters, are unexpectedly-not.

A sucking bloodfest.
 

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