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A Flick about BIGFOOT? I'm in.

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May 28, 2012
I am always watching short films or documentaries about Bigfoot, so this would be right up my alley. If they can make it fun and show the viewers things they haven't seen, it could be successful.

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Good story with potential

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November 13, 2011
The first half of the script, except for the initial scene in which the Sasquat kills the hunters, I feel like a Kids and family one, with a good plot focused on the three teenagers relationship. The characters are good and bring us interest in the story.

At the second half, the story becomes more dramatic, approaching of suspense.

It is a good story, but, personally, I would like to see some changes (I have tried to minimize the spoilers):

1) It could be focused in a Kids and Family movie or in a real Suspense/Horror, instead of being between the two genres;
2) Whatever the choice, I think Lynn deservers more time on screen and a better final scene, maybe changing her fate;
3) The nerd boys are really good characters, but will improve my empathy with each one if they have a little more distinct personalities among themselves;
4) How about showing clearly the Bigfoot only at the finals scenes? Perhaps it could increase the suspense: "Is there really a Bigfoot?” I know it is somehow a cliché, but, maybe, it would work better;
5) Having a very short parallel plot to alternate with the "all the time" three teenagers in forest scenes, could be fine. In the Kids and family style, it could be something showing the teens parents;
6) I missed a minimal explain of the "strange object";
7) I would like to see more participation of the drug dealers. Choosing a suspense way, Lynn could wound one and kill another, the remaining one runs off and returns later with some other to chase them;
8) An ending involving a Sasquatches vs. Drug Dealers battle, seems great to me. The creatures even could save, willingly or not, the teens from the drug smugglers.
9) I would consider the Jamie’s camera staying with them at the end.

Note: On page 6 the action after Blake's talking is described involving Greg and seems that it would be Blake.

It was a good job. I hope my comments may be useful somehow. I wish you even more success with your project.
 

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