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Premise:
3.5 stars
(4)
 
Story structure:
2.8 stars
(4)
 
Character:
3.3 stars
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Dialogue:
2.8 stars
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Emotion:
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Earth shaker

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
October 30, 2017
Good project. Keep with it.
 
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Its not the best story I've came by

Overall Recommendation:
1 stars
 
Premise:
2 stars
 
Story structure:
2 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
1 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
June 05, 2015
Be more creative
 
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Rating of Earth Shaker

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
December 13, 2014
 
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Minotaur + Dracula + Mummy

Overall Recommendation:
1 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
1 stars
 
Character:
2 stars
 
Dialogue:
2 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
October 06, 2014
In Short:

I think the basic premise, of this sleeping Minotaur being awoken and all hell breaking loose, including an unnatural attraction to a chosen women, with heavy sexual overtones, is very cool.

But I don't think the story quite works as is. The wind up at the beginning is very long. Flashback gives away everything in the beginning, then it takes a long time to get the body out of the cave, then a long time for the minotaur to finally wake up, and when it happens, we get some crazy necromancy in the museum, and then a really crazy death. The actions and motives of most of the characters are confused and not well conveyed.

With a shorter wind up (intro and interregnum to awakening), a little more action from the protagonist (Naomi ought to try doing something rather than fretting and having lunch), and maybe getting rid of some of the wackier side elements (Artie and his beetles), I think the script would be a lot stronger.
 

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