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Original soldiers

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
November 17, 2015
Much better than the video. Keep at it Amazon.
 
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Good core - Too much cheese

Overall Recommendation:
2 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
2 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
2 stars
 
Emotion:
1 stars
 
September 05, 2015
The concept of using droids to fight was interesting. What I liked about it is that is wasn't AI, but people behind the machines. Takes a different dynamic than say Terminator.

Another interesting dynamic was the generation gap seen between the new type soldiers and older type soldiers. But it wasn't full bias or fair to both sides. Seems like the older "salty" Soldier was right about fighting his style, would have been good to see a balance to where the Younger generations way had some merit too.

What I didn't like was the whole single point of failure nucleus. Government would never build a system without fail safes and having the VP get codes that could launch a nuclear strike on the US isn't believable or very entertaining. This story would be much better feeding off of real world events that could give a plausible "fiction" scenario. Cyber warfare has been in the news from China to Russian breaking in and hacking US government systems. Having this dynamic is less cheese than torturing a VP for "codes". The intent of the off shore platform could be an evolution in cyber warfare in that these remote hubs are the only way to access the cloud that controls government automated systems.

Have the young hero gain access to his bot and be in the final scene. He intervenes with his bot against the prototype as the others are pushing the pod over the side.

Needs a re-write but has merit.
 
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Like the outlining of the process

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
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No rating
 
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No rating
 
July 15, 2015
Like the process of how the story goes, and doesn't mention about any of the Mars setting, but mentions the rebellious movement from the renegade general. I like how the scenario is written how the general thinks he has authority over the world and how the special team stops him.
 
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Overused Concept

Overall Recommendation:
1 stars
 
Premise:
1 stars
 
Story structure:
1 stars
 
Character:
1 stars
 
Dialogue:
1 stars
 
Emotion:
1 stars
 
July 07, 2015
It's an overused concept (man and machine), but most of all, there's no script. I'm really not sure how this even got on the development slate (unless it wasn't). No offense intended, but this needs about a year's more worth of work.
 
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Nice Idea But Doesn't Come Across as New

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
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3 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
June 15, 2015
 
0 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

This is not a script

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1 stars
 
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No rating
 
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May 03, 2015
The title says it all. The storyboard made it look interesting, but no script posted.
 
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A quality action story.

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
May 01, 2015
Very cool idea. It has bits and pieces from a lot of movies I like. With a big budget this could be a really great action flick.
 
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Original Soldiers

Overall Recommendation:
1 stars
 
Premise:
2 stars
 
Story structure:
2 stars
 
Character:
2 stars
 
Dialogue:
2 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
March 11, 2015
Sorry but the screenplay Original Soldiers is good for kids book not
for Hollywood, too much action, cheap,
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Good start

Overall Recommendation:
2 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
2 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
2 stars
 
Emotion:
No rating
 
March 04, 2015
 
1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

I didn't get it?

Overall Recommendation:
1 stars
 
Premise:
1 stars
 
Story structure:
1 stars
 
Character:
1 stars
 
Dialogue:
1 stars
 
Emotion:
1 stars
 
November 27, 2013
Way too many movies like. Didn't find it different, unique or creative. Too much cliche and not enough creativity. I can tell when something is about to happen.
 

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