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Best first scene I've read

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February 02, 2012
I love the beginning of this revision. It's so easy to picture it in my mind. I love all the lighting, and the entire feel. Red the entire scrip. The changes and additions were good, and the restructuring of the timeline improved the original script. Good, good job!
 

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