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1 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

Improvement on a funny concept

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5 stars
 
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February 07, 2012
This is a much-improved version of this script. It really tightens up the story in some places, and improves the dialogue almost everywhere it's been changed. Many of the problems I had with the original have been fixed (and fixed well) by Eugene.
 
1 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

Tremendous

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
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4 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
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4 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
February 06, 2012
This script is a shining example of the originality that can be gleaned from taking well-known figures (in this case, the Founding Fathers) and putting them in all manner of action-hero situations. The result is equal parts thrilling, silly, and fun, with just enough tongue-in-cheek absurdity to keep it from collapsing upon itself.

There are nods to every conceivable genre in here -- historical, kung fu, western, science fiction, mad scientist, action, adventure, mystery, and of course, ninjas. British ninjas, of course. And who knew that Ben Franklin invented the Snuggie? He was a prolific inventor, after all. Who's to say he didn't?

An enjoyable, fast-paced adventure that will guarantee you never look at Betsy Ross quite the same way again.
 
0 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

Even funnier!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
February 02, 2012
 
1 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

An unbelievable script that will keep you in stitches!

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5 stars
 
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4 stars
 
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5 stars
 
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5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
February 02, 2012
Eugene took a script that was weak at best, and turned into a comedy that I would pay to see. I read both scripts (the original, then this one) and I can honestly say Eugene's kept me in stitches with farcical imagery. While Ben Franklin himself is probably turning in his grave, anyone that reads this will be laughing their asses off! It's a fast paced read, and even though the scenes are so ridiculous, they seem plausible here! Kudos!
 

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