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Aliens, Humans, And Clones

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3 stars
 
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March 24, 2011
I had a hard time with this one. I couldn't get into the story. With all the converting to alien form, reverting back, and the sudden appearance of multiple clones, it was hard for me to follow what was going on. Perhaps if I saw it on the screen (as opposed to reading it) it would be easier, especially if distinctive looking actors were cast.

One thought I had was that it might work better with an audience superior structure. That way there would be some foreshadowing of what was to come, and it would build suspense.

The writing itself - sentence structure and all that- is very good.

I didn't know what to think of Frank, whether he was the hero or the villain. Then when he converted to alien form about two thirds of the way into the script, I was completely lost.

Of course, this is entirely subjective. Feel free to ignore any or all of it.
 

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