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0 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

You are doing your script more harm than good with this movie clip.

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July 25, 2011
I would recommend that you take this animated clip down. I looked at it and was like - okay, what the heck is this? The voices were choppy and hard to understand, the scene you chose to add tells nothing substantive about the story, characters, or script - in fact, it's even wrong according to your script. The curvaceous, black therapist Dr. Kent has morphed here into a scrawny white dude. And the afros are not working at all - and I love our natural hair. But not when it comes in an octagon. No - this clip is an injustice to your wonderful script. Your writing is serious bidness - if you don't take it seriously, no one else will. This would makes someone skip right to the next test film and maybe even skip over your script altogether. This is live action - find some live. action. if you wanna throw up a lil somethin somethin - but pick a good scene. Shoot the scene where dude dies from eatin all them beans on his wedding night. Hilarious. Or shoot the scene where she goes speed dating and gets all those sheets of interested guys back. Look at trailers on youtube and if you're gonna shoot something - shoot a teaser trailer for this script. I really, really, really think you should take this thing off here and not have it associated with your great script. I can't d-rate (detail rate) this.
 
0 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Really need more content

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3 stars
 
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4 stars
 
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December 29, 2010
Your synopsis really attracted me to the story, but I was a little disappointed by the 27 second movie that was posted. I'm really hoping that you expound more and do this as a live action film. I'll keep checking.
 
1 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

Cute

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December 26, 2010
You should think about expanding this. Give the audience more key scenes so we can piece the script together in a visual.
 
1 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

Nice One

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December 09, 2010
 

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