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Good title.

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January 15, 2011
Your formatting is still off. I can't tell if it's narrators, voice overs, or all a dream. Clarify it a little more. Your script has a definite niche, but not a large one. It play into a lot of stereotypes that as a black woman needs to be changed.
 

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