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Loved the characters, but maybe a clearer ending

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August 23, 2016
The character development and dialogue were written very well. Very easy to follow and picture as the script progressed. It did seem to end abruptly with many questions left unanswered, for example, what happens with Sheila, or the other vampires, why did Vincent do what he did, and how is the situation contained ? It reminded of tremors and the fog, however followed an original story which I enjoyed. Everything with the characters and dialogue was fantastic, even characters with a short screen time you developed well through their dialogue which is something I have trouble with. Maybe just go back through when they arrive at the mill I think that part of the story could be clearer and maybe be tightened up a little, but overall it kept my interest which is what I look for when reading a script, I hope this was helpful.
 

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