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Still a fun movie

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January 14, 2011
 
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Getting better!

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January 14, 2011
Good job Robert! I like that you got rid of some of the swear words and replaced them with powerful dialogue. Now I can take my son to see it in the theater!

I'm glad you didn't alter any of the plot points. This screenplay has many great turns and I love the ending. Good luck in the competition!
 

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