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A very good work!

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March 10, 2011
A really good script. The pace is tight, the original plot and never obvious. The only comment I can make is that these characters are sometimes too "Indiana Jones".

For the rest, great job!
 
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Very Strong Brilliance

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February 25, 2011
Very Brilliant Script. I love scripts and films that incorporate facts and business into some sort of emotional appeal. And the Alchemist Agenda flourishes in that.

Really like what you've done with Jonathan's character and his ultimate goal. Very clever.

Alot of people don't give the opposition in their scripts a great reason for OPPOSING, but you do. They all want the same thing and are working towards the same goal.

Amazing, and would love to see this on screen. I followed you and your project. Take a look at Inversion when you get the chance. Give me some criticism.

Overall: Excellent screenplay, just make sure you put some sort of vision into it and it'll do fine.

-Bradley Eversley
 

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