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Bi-planes, u-boats and Zepplins. What else could you ask for?

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4 stars
 
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March 25, 2011
 
2 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

Entertaining.

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March 02, 2011
The story reminds me of a type of Indiana Jones or National Treasure adventure. The story is a bit long and drags in some spots, but overall, it is entertaining.
 
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A quick and dirty scan of SKY PIRATES (5th draft)

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5 stars
 
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February 12, 2011
Hi Walter:

Did a quick scan of your January, 2011 semi-finalist and I think you have a cool script, brother-man.

I'd do a quick table read, if I were you, just for the hell of it.

I think if you do that, you might figure out a way to cut it down from 122 pages to 110 or so.

I don't think the problem is with a few long monologues, I like those, they provide needed exposition, but rather you might fuse or lose a few bits of visual exposition if you find redundancy.

Overall, I like your style and I like the infusion of real dialogue, like Churchill's speech.

Don't surrender, bro.

Never surrender.

Keep punching keys,
Paul
 

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