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A story with great heart!

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December 07, 2015
 
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Excellent!

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December 07, 2015
 
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Confusing

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November 18, 2014
The story is a little confusing. Alex is Ian's son but he is a ghost in the story right? Why do we know nothing about Phyllis? Your audience will never know where they are, the present, the past, or in Ian's day dream.
 

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