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Formatting nightmare

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July 19, 2014
This script has a lot of issues. The format is wrong and the grammar (spelling & capitalization) errors are everywhere, Outside of that the story is not original and the dialogue is sophomoric. The bum comes out of nowhere and seems to serve no purpose. All the characters seem to just be stock characters speaking stock dialogue. Of course that doesn't mean you could finish it and rewrite it and it wouldn't be good, but what I saw here was not interesting, however I saw only 8 pages.
 

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