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Great revision!

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February 24, 2011
Best revision so far. This version rocks!

Hope to see it in the movies some day.

Your hard work is paying off.
 
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The 6th time is the charm!

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February 24, 2011
Robert, you hit a home rtun with this revision. I don't know what took you so long. I'm so glad you removed the daydreams from the script. They were too confusing.

The screenplay is easier to read for sure. I thought it reads really fast too.

Good luck in the Amazon compettion in the future with this one!!!
 

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