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Just a thought, don't mean to be mean.

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January 14, 2014
I found it to much, this happened and this happened and then this happened. We, the audience, need more of what the characters think and how or why they are motivated. like in the beginning when the boy ask grandpas about the journal, he should say something like, that's an old wives tales. I'd rather you not think about that. the boy would ask why? Because great Uncle adam went looking for it and was never seen again. Just a quick thought of making the script less one dimensional.
 

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