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A Fun Read

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April 02, 2011
There is lots of avenues for this interesting premise.

If you keep it in this current state you'll have to make more set ups and pay offs...the NEED FOR BATTERIES was very good track to follow, but as soon as you show IT the story dwindles to a game of cat and mice, ice pops, and gore.

The juxtaposition of the gore against the bubbly dialogue makes this quite campy. Though I will admit you've thrown in some nice thematic visual pieces...the recycling symbol for example.

There is a real interesting story hear if you can wrangle it out and develop the better parts. Your interactions of characters are great.

I really like all the characters, supporting and main, it was fun, like the neighbors town to the Northern Exposure town, I just really enjoyed spending time in their company.


Good Luck and thanks for the fun Saturday matinee.
 

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