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3 out of 6 people found the following review helpful:

Great Start, Let's finish it.

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April 29, 2011
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Page 88 action line that can't be filmed. How do we know what A. SCREENWRITER struggles to come up with?

"A screenwriter desprately struggles to come up with the best logline ever for Amazon Studio’s new ‘Premise Wars’ section."

Two adverbs used may could have chosen better verbs.

Funny!

Since it is open, maybe I'll upload a version that extends the story a little. Lets see if it catches on.

Geo
 
4 out of 6 people found the following review helpful:

Loll

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April 28, 2011
Very funny! Hihihi
 

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