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Great! Where will it go?

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The protag seems a little old at 30. By that age we would expect an experienced person with maybe a wife or two with kids to support.

Suggest a little younger oats sewing kind of protag. The genera chosen was Sci Fi and Horror. Well, so far, I don't see any of that. :o)

If I get a day or two off, I might flesh it out to about 100 pages.
 

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