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Lacks realism

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January 01, 2015
Schoolgirl doesn't ring true, and the dialogue seems to only come from the writers mouth.
Unrealistic movement in cafe killing scene and blood spurting through a bullet hole in the toilet stall is too much, shooting through a glory-hole would work better. Can't see how anyone would wash their face in a slimy sink and manage to find paper towels, and toilet roll in such a filthy place.
 
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Could Be Better

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November 01, 2014
 

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