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May 23, 2011
I like this a lot. thank you for doing this, it means a lot. i added about 6 or 7 pages on to it but i dont think ill add it, send me a private message and i'll email it to you. the thing is I probably shouldn't have put it up because i cant legally use it for 18 months right? which isnt very good if i wanted to publish it when it's drawn out and everything. but that all depends how fast i crank out these pages so i have no idea. but i'm really glad that you took the time to do a treatment and i've learned a lot. so once again. Thank you :)
 

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