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E.T.I. Extraterrestrial Intelligence.

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3 stars
 
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3 stars
 
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November 29, 2015
You have a good premise. Please flesh it out more.
 
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Not Partial to Cliff Hangers

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I don't care for cliff hangers so that may skew my rating. The premise of a skeptical student investigating someone who is famous for writing books about UFO abductions is a good one. Changing from Sarah's perspective to a third person perspective seems to have advantages and disadvantages. An advantage is the audience gets more information. A disadvantage is it makes it difficult for the audience to keep track of how much Sarah knows. Delving into Sarah's personal life seems to distract rather than give the audience a personal connection with Sarah.
 

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