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4 Stars:
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Premise:
4.5 stars
(4)
 
Story structure:
4.0 stars
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Character:
4.3 stars
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Dialogue:
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Emotion:
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premise wars.

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
May 08, 2016
I am working a hard retail job trying to pay the rent to present a project to amazon studios in hope of the big pay off. I feel for you brother. My suggestion is to take advantage of the chat sessions they help with formatting the script. I use the video presentation because my job does not permit me to do screenplays. Don't give up. It can happen.
 
1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Still Laughing my Turkey Butt Off

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
May 07, 2015
Genius... Pure Genius.. You guys have hit upon the best premise of all. I am VERY hard to please, especially when it comes to comedy. This script reads smoothly and quickly and though get s a bit confusing jumping back and forth I think the visual element will smooth that over in/post production.

Can't say more.
 
1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

You actually did it?

Overall Recommendation:
2 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
2 stars
 
Character:
2 stars
 
Dialogue:
1 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
January 11, 2015
You actually stretched this out to a full script length? How long did that take you? I assume it's just practice, because we know it'll never be made. It's kinda funny, but the dialogue and structure needs a lot of work.
 
1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Most Excellent

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
January 17, 2013
Most Excellent
 

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