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4.6 stars
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Premise:
4.0 stars
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Character:
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2 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

Expressive Artwork, Good Music

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
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Emotion:
4 stars
 
July 14, 2011
I like the artwork. The artist shows good expression with a minimum of detail. The music has a driving beat, perfect for the storyline.

I think that you might have more drawings than you really need. In addition, a few on screen titles might help to clarify what's going on. Of course, this is all just my opinion, and I look forward to viewing the completed test movie.

Good luck with it.
 
2 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

Looks Good

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
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3 stars
 
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3 stars
 
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L

July 12, 2011
Agree that your main char needs to look a bit more unique. Hard to pick her out immediately when you have other female char's in the story.

Also, maybe try a slightly diff look for the flashbacks to make it more obvious that we're looking at flashbacks to the night before.

You lost me a little bit when you got into the story & started cross cutting back & forth, but the story & timeline should be more apparent when the dialogue is added. Overall, good job. Good luck with this!
 
4 out of 4 people found the following review helpful:

Looks good.

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5 stars
 
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No rating
 
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July 12, 2011
Clear movements between the shots. I would suggest a slight visual addition to your main character so she has a unique look to stand out. A mole would work.

Other then that, I like the whole The Morning After feel...can't wait for the dialogue.
 
6 out of 7 people found the following review helpful:

Nice!

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5 stars
 
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July 11, 2011
Just goes to show what you can do with simple line drawings!
 
3 out of 4 people found the following review helpful:

Looking Good

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5 stars
 
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July 11, 2011
The story boards look great so far. I can't wait to see the final cut with dialog.
 

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