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1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

An emotional journey of a girl and her teddy bear

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5 stars
 
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February 06, 2012
a beautiful story of innocence,
the story of a little girl and her imaginary friend/companion that takes on the role of a teddy bear, this is a captivating story of unconditional love and heartache in this moving story of Raya`s struggle with emotional loss and the strength to get through it all with the aid of her imaginary friend/guadian (bear),
i recomend this to everyone but keep tissues to hand the emotion may just pull you in
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Kind of a tough read..........

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3 stars
 
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Story structure:
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November 14, 2011
It's a challenge to read this script as it lags a little in the start, but then it gets moving a little.

As for some technical issues, I found there to be many missing words to sentences, a ton of quotation marks, and the use of italics, which is frowned on.

The two stories running side by side become a blur from the boat to the house and back again. I found this a little confusing.

Overall, the idea is great, but not really Horror. More along the lines of maybe DRAMA/THRILLER.

I feel if this movie where to be made, I would go see it, but I would find myself disappointed and maybe somewhat confused if presented in this version.

Maybe try to read through it or have a friend or family member read it to you, I find it helps when I have a great idea and it doesn't come out the way I see it in my head.

Best of Luck,
Michael
 

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