Overall Recommendation:
4.7 stars
(6)
5 Stars:
83.33%
(5)
 
4 Stars:
0%
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3 Stars:
16.67%
(1)
 
2 Stars:
0%
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1 Stars:
0%
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Premise:
4.7 stars
(6)
 
Story structure:
4.7 stars
(6)
 
Character:
4.7 stars
(6)
 
Dialogue:
4.3 stars
(6)
 
Emotion:
4.7 stars
(6)
 
 
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0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Appropriate Title

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
September 08, 2011
 
1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

BRAVO!!!!!!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
September 03, 2011
The tempo, at the start of the script, gradually builds, cleverly drawing this reader in; then, from the middle to the very end it's unleashed. A rapid crescendo, spins premise, characters and their emotions into wonderful, heartfelt resolutions. The character development is smooth and excellently executed throughout.
 
1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

This feels so real.

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
August 22, 2011
This script is nothing less than the best one I've read in a long time...and I have done coverage for production companies before. I really like the way the characters are so subtle yet they say such powerful things. It's a rare writer who can pull that off. It's very hard to make your characters say shocking things in a natural way and this script is full of provocative dialogue. The only criticism I have is that maybe there are times when people are a bit too natural about the things they say and maybe, give societies saturation with movies and over-the-top statements on reality TV, they might actually be a bit more theatrical in real life.

I absolutely see this as a film - not as a huge blockbuster, but as a vehicle for Oscar-worthy performances from some up and coming actors who want to really show the world their chops.
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Lovely!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
August 22, 2011
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Great!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
August 19, 2011
Keeps you hooked!
 
0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Well done.

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
August 19, 2011
 

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