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December 04, 2012
I loved the premise, I could easily see this becoming a great film, but the script just didn't excite me as much as your logline. I think it is close though.
Some of the pranks pulled on each group seemed a little over the top, or at least like the other should have seen it coming.
The characters also seemed more childish than grouchy old men.
I look forward to any future drafts and will love to see it made someday.
 

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