Overall Recommendation:
4.7 stars
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5 Stars:
66.67%
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4 Stars:
33.33%
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3 Stars:
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1 Stars:
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Premise:
3.7 stars
(3)
 
Story structure:
4.0 stars
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Character:
4.0 stars
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Dialogue:
3.7 stars
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Emotion:
4.0 stars
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1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Very moving and authenticated use of writing in the narrative story mode!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
September 09, 2011
Without claiming any specifics,I want to share my feeling and ideas on this script.
It was captivating from the get and intriguing so it was improbable to set down even when
it was needed.
I really was overall impressed expecting something relatively typical as I have read in some previous screenplays I have had to read for roles,and was entirely blown away by the depth of characters depicted and the story itself.
It has a great sense of flow and yet at the same time keeps the mind wondering but surprises when the mind typically thinks it knows where it will be lead.
Really liked this one and think it will be a great movie where so many lack its substance and style that are made.
 
2 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

Well done!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
September 09, 2011
To begin, I have never read a script like this. I have always stuck with novels. I was a bit surprised once I started reading, but soon got the hang of things. Now, that being said, I felt it was a strong tale. The characters were engaging and there was a strong sense of suspense. I didn't feel any of the surprises were telegraphed, so I enjoyed them when they arrived in the plot. Quite a nice piece. Congratulations to the writer. He did a fine job! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
 
2 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

Pray For Dawn... Could work on the screen.

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
August 27, 2011
The story flows easily. The script has a basic story line, which upon reading is easy to imagine the scenes playing out on screen.
I liked the bit of humour at the start.
With the right cast, I feel upon final production, this could prove to be a good movie.
 

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