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Not quite hooked

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
2 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
2 stars
 
Emotion:
1 stars
 
September 03, 2011
I decided to do a review of the first five pages of all the scripts, and come back to the script and do a full review if the first five pages made me want to read it. I decided to start with the scripts that had not already received some reviews.

I read the original script and the Amazon Studio Story Department notes and am using my personal interpretation of what they intended only.

Pros: Caracalla was an excellent choice for emperor, he was such a real life character that I have been surprised that no one else went that direction. He is well drawn with great over-the-top lines like They're just slaves, I can get more. a spoiled baddie that an actor would love to play.

Cons: Some heavy description and unfilmable action lines more suited to prose than a screenplay such as Something is wrong and Verica knows it.

rewrite

Pros: Titus appears in the beginning.

Cons: He is no more developed than in the first, it lacks significant action.
 

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