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ZvG: Zombies Vs Gladiators, A.T.'s 1st Draft

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Fast Read That Vastly Improves Original

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August 12, 2011
I read this in one sitting in about 45 minutes. It's a fast-paced, action-packed, bloody thrill ride. Titus is much more fleshed-out than the original or the other revisions I've seen. I thought using Mars for the new villain and as the cause of the zombies was brilliant. And then the TWISTS!! You think this story is headed in one direction and SCREEEECH, the whole ride jerks you in another direction. This script had me questioning everything halfway through.

A lot has survived from the original so it still feels like the same story but so much has changed too. This looks like exactly what Amazon was asking for. It hits all the weak spots and keeps all the strengths. If anything, this script just needs more character development for the supporting characters and possibly more exploration of Titus and Lavinia's budding relationship.

Other than that, this is my favorite so far in this rewrite comp. I could see the movie in my head the entire ride. It's a vast improvement. Really well-written. Congrats and great work!


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