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Title Average Rating Downloads Date
Created

THE LAST CONTACT David's Original Draft (Script 1)

1.0 stars
(1)
99 02/08/16

TIME CADET David's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
34 02/08/16

Reviews David Has Written

Artifice Video 1 - Comedy/Satire

5 stars
Great art and video quality. Almost ready for released. Just needs more work on the script and an increase in length so that it can be either a short film or a full feature.
April 14, 2017

Flat Pennies Video 1 - more flattened pennies

5 stars
Imaginative!
December 17, 2016

Dixie Highway Video 1 - Introduction video

1 stars
bad pitch. forget the $10K
October 25, 2015

Cameron's Crew, Pilot Script 1 - Apple Of My Eye

4 stars
Good script. Memorable Characters.
June 14, 2015

Elizabeth June's CHUCH!, elizabeth's Original Draft

1 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

CHURCH OR CHUCH?

Overall Recommendation:
2 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
2 stars
 
Character:
2 stars
 
Dialogue:
2 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
October 20, 2014
Is this a true story or fiction? Too much flashback, too much digression from the main story. I read up to page 50 and gave up. April is meant to be a nice girl, a church girl, abused, that we should feel sympathetic to, but in the opening pages we see her giving a blowjob to a german dude. And not only that she stole his wallet.
She attacks the pastor for what he did to her, he abused her at the age of 12 and she took in and the Pastor's associates took her to a secret abortion clinic to cover up. Now that she is older I expect a conflict between her and the Pastor where upon he is eventually exposed as a pedophile and she getting some form of compensation, but I have a feeling the story will end up with her being in the psychiatric hospital and the pastor barely gets bruised.
then again if this is a work of fiction why the incessant attack on the seventh day Adventist church? Why not use an imaginary church? If this gets made into a movie, it will put off a lot of viewers.
The settings for the movie is 1990 - 1993 but we have a mixed up of history in around page 8. I quote:
APRIL:
Look at the Catholic victims. They
got millions and those priests got
what they deserved.

Before 1999, no catholic priest has been fully exposed and none of their victims had yet got compensation.
 

Predator Origins Video 1 - Sci/Action

1 stars
I thought I'd see some predators, but it was a dude talking to his cellphone
October 12, 2014

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