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America's Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String, Jamster's 6th Draft

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June 15, 2014
Dear Jason Ungate,

Hello, my name is Ryan Sinnott and I am a sophomore at Commack High
School. I take a class called Film as Literature and our teacher, Mr.
Patterson, decided that our final would be based off a movie on this
website. We had to watch trailers to the film as well as read the script and here is what I have found about your movie, "America's Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String." I really like the story due to the fact that you incorporate the genres of action and adventure, comedy, and a little bit of history very well together. Usually you don’t see the genres together too often and I believe that is why it’s so intriguing. I like how you make Benjamin Franklin an action character because that’s not what people are used to. This movie makes his life more exciting than it actually was. I find this movie interesting because it wasn’t based off a book. It was made out of pure imagination and that’s why I think it’s such a cool and interesting movie. The only thing I don’t like about the movie is that in some serious parts, you try to incorporate some humor when it is not needed. Like in the beginning Franklin and Washington are having a serious conversation and then all of a sudden, Washington says a joke to the entire audience at the party. Besides that, I really liked the movie.I wish you the best in your quest to get this movie in theaters and
hope to it in one in the future.

Ryan Sinnott


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