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Title Average Rating Downloads Date
Created

Intimate Friends demo pdf Daniel's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
2 10/03/15

Intimate Friends Daniel's 3rd Draft (Script 3)

No rating
6 07/21/15

War on Terror Daniel's Original Draft (Script 1)

3.3 stars
(3)
11 07/19/15

Pizza Man Daniel's Original Draft (Script 1)

3.4 stars
(5)
14 07/18/15

Intimate Friends Daniel's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

4.4 stars
(7)
39 05/02/15

Intimate Friends Daniel's Original Draft (Script 1)

3.5 stars
(2)
5 05/02/15

Reviews Daniel Has Written

Deranged (working title), Madalaine's Original Draft

0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

You need to write more than that

Overall Recommendation:
2 stars
 
Premise:
1 stars
 
Story structure:
1 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
2 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
July 20, 2015
you need to write more than that for something soild.
 

The Janitor, Shawn's Original Draft

0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Good start

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
July 09, 2015
Its apparent there has been some effort cited here. Yet, this is still a draft which needs to be corrected.
 

The Family, Shawn's Original Draft

0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Good job done here!

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
July 09, 2015
This is a really good piece. It just need some fixing I think. The story is awesome. Its just the story structure. You want to consider fixing "continue" on every page. Professionals know thats it supposed to be there. Its like telling somebody to laugh when someone says a joke. In other words, it's expected. Another tip, professional writers tend to use less "expression use".

But its definitely a good start. Keep up the good work!
 

"A Day of Giving" in your community or a community in need. SHOW YOUR HEART!!, Christine's Original Draft

0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Really good cause!

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
2 stars
 
Story structure:
2 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
June 15, 2015
It's really good but the story stucture is somewhat bizarre,
 

Please Hulk Hogan, Don't Come Over, Dave's Original Draft

0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

It's outstanding!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
2 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
June 15, 2015
I like it man! HULK! Really cool topic. But you wanna consider what audience you have. I'm pretty sure this one is for children. So I think it should be kept more kiddish. Also, try not to put (CONT'D) because it's already obvious (I recently discovered that). You also want to consider the dialogue, which isn't really what you would expect in a children's movie. But good job over all. Then reason why I give you five even after many flaws is because the story is great (with some editing) for children.