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Scripts

Title Average Rating Downloads Date
Created

Flat Pennies Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
5 02/05/18

Flat Pennies Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
2 06/22/17

Flat Pennies Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
34 04/03/17

Flat Pennies Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
37 10/31/16

Flat Pennies Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

2.0 stars
(1)
33 07/20/16

Flat Pennies Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
87 01/20/16

FLAT PENNIES Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
10 12/08/15

Flat Pennies Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
36 10/23/15

FLAT PENNIES Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
4 09/07/15

Flat Pennies Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
10 07/22/15

Flat Pennies Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
12 05/26/15

Flat Pennies Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
27 04/10/15

FLAT PENNIES Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

4.0 stars
(2)
43 02/03/15

FLAT PENNIES Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
13 12/16/14

Flat Pennies Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
10 10/20/14

Flat Pennies Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
27 08/29/14

FLAT PENNIES Robert's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

5.0 stars
(1)
43 11/12/13

Wrestling With Dinosaurs Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
22 11/06/13

Flat Pennies John's 1st Draft (Script 25)

4.0 stars
(3)
201 07/04/13

FLAT PENNIES Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
10 06/28/13

Flat Pennies Robert's 21st Draft (Script 24)

4.0 stars
(1)
97 04/05/13

Flat Pennies Robert's 20th Draft (Script 23)

2.0 stars
(1)
52 01/18/13

Flat Pennies Robert's 19th Draft (Script 22)

No rating
20 01/08/13

Flat Pennies Robert's 18th Draft (Script 21)

No rating
15 11/20/12

Flat Pennies Robert's 17th Draft (Script 20)

No rating
15 09/19/12

Flat Pennies Robert's 16th Draft (Script 19)

No rating
24 08/02/12

Flat Pennies Robert's 15th Draft (Script 18)

No rating
35 06/13/12

Flat Pennies Jamster's 2nd Draft (Script 17)

No rating
27 04/22/12

Flat Pennies Robert's 14th Draft (Script 16)

4.0 stars
(1)
28 04/09/12

Flat Pennies Jamster's 1st Draft (Script 15)

No rating
21 03/23/12

Flat Pennies Robert's 13th Draft (Script 14)

No rating
398 12/30/11

Flat Pennies Robert's 12th Draft (Script 13)

3.0 stars
(1)
28 11/30/11

Flat Pennies Robert's 11th Draft (Script 12)

No rating
18 10/28/11

Flat Pennies Robert's 10th Draft (Script 11)

No rating
18 07/29/11

Flat Pennies Robert's 9th Draft (Script 9)

No rating
30 05/05/11

Flat Pennies Robert's 7th Draft (Script 7)

4.3 stars
(3)
28 03/03/11

Flat Pennies Robert's 6th Draft (Script 6)

4.5 stars
(2)
20 02/24/11

Flat Pennies Robert's 5th Draft (Script 5)

4.0 stars
(2)
25 01/27/11

Flat Pennies Robert's 4th Draft (Script 4)

4.0 stars
(2)
15 01/14/11

Flat Pennies Robert's 3rd Draft (Script 3)

4.7 stars
(3)
26 12/02/10

Flat Pennies Robert's 2nd Draft (Script 2)

3.7 stars
(3)
48 11/17/10

Flat Pennies Robert's Original Draft (Script 1)

4.0 stars
(1)
28 11/17/10

Storyboards

Title Views Date
Created

Flat Pennies Robert's Drama (Storyboard 1)

476 07/03/13

Series Projects

Pilot Scripts

Title Average Rating Plays/
Downloads
Date
Created

Flat Pennies Pilot Script 1 - Flat Pennies

No rating
6 07/31/17

Reviews Robert Has Written

Flat Pennies, John's 1st Draft

0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

A story with great heart!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
December 07, 2015
 

VIRAL, steven's Original Draft

2 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

This creative idea works on many fronts

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
March 18, 2015
This was a quick and easy read. I enjoyed how the writer kept the pacing and action taut.

The concept for the story is original and unique. I loved, for example, how a child's toy bomb created by terrorists didn't explode simply because the batteries were put in the wrong direction. It's that sort of creative storytelling that really gives "Viral" such a powerful trajectory.

The writer also does a good job with dialogue, one of the toughest aspects to screenwriting. The dialogue in "Viral" is tight, dramatic, and to the point, with no extraneous fluff.

I think "Viral" would be an entertaining and riveting movie.
 

Flat Pennies Video 1 - more flattened pennies

5 stars
This is a great rail safety PSA!
February 19, 2015

Myth of a Modern Man, Gary's Animatic

3 out of 4 people found the following review helpful:

Very Enjoyable!

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
March 31, 2011
I enjoyed this a lot. Everyone who was involved in the making of the animatic did a fine job.

I liked the voices, the artwork, the direction-of-motion-arrows, the colorful characters and the artist's great facial portrayal of emotion.

I laughed when Dr. Kaplan sprayed the office and said "I hate the smell of old people." Funny!

The dialogue was really good. Well paced and snappy.

Overall, a very enjoyable experience.
 

Far From Me, E's Storyboards (High Res)

1 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

Touching story with warm graphics

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
March 04, 2011
This is a warm-hearted and honest story that I enjoyed a lot. And the graphics are fun and light. You're obviously not trying to be Van Gogh here, but the pictures work in an odd way.

I think you could go with your strength. That is, very innocent drawings. And that means, this storyboard would be ideal for helping children cope with loss. Maybe that's what you were going for. You could even turn this story and some of the drawings into a book. Hope these comments help.

Keep up the good work!
 

Get Motivated, A's Original Draft

4 out of 6 people found the following review helpful:

Got a Real Shot with This One

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
November 21, 2010
Read your script and the other reviews posted here. I've seen your vocal defense of this contest on various screenwriting boards. Wow, looks like you've attracted a few fans and a few detractors based on that.

But what an active response from the Amazon community. I think you may have more reviews than any other project here. So let's get to it.

The big hook. A bunch of computer nerds and indoor types out in the wilderness trying to survive.

Okay, for your protagonist, Dennis, his true goal is to become a leader, right? His false goal is to suck up to Dave and get the promotion. That plays out nicely.

The characters begin as sketches. You develop them from there, and actors bring a lot to the table. Some talented comic actors would love this.

The stereotype thing, well nerds are nerds. There are unique characters for sure. Seemed a couple of reviewers had a problem with that. Well, after all, you are in competition with others.

Still, another draft to clean up the RTF holdover typos (not that big of a foul since so many of us on here have the same problem since Amazon doesn't accept the perfection of PDFs!). Definitely go through the arcs of the characters again -- make sure they play out.

I like the opening action. Get you into the "battle for survival" just down the road. You've got them out of the ordinary world (office setting) and in over their heads in the wilderness. Nice touch.

Reminded me of "Shawn of the Dead" or "Hot Fuzz." Action comedy a bit dark at times and with satire. (Loved those self-help book titles!)

Think you've got a real shot with this one. Do another draft (10 weeks left in the contest) and move from there. Good luck on this project.

Hope to see this on the screen one day. Thanks for the read.
 

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