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Pilot Scripts

Title Average Rating Plays/
Downloads
Date
Created

Superstitious Pilot Script 7

4.0 stars
(1)
29 02/16/18

Superstitious Pilot Script 6

4.0 stars
(1)
8 01/21/18

Superstitious Pilot Script 5

No rating
6 12/21/17

Superstitious Pilot Script 4

No rating
7 10/20/17

Superstitious Pilot Script 3

No rating
3 10/08/17

Superstitious Pilot Script 2

No rating
6 08/27/17

Superstitious Pilot Script 1

No rating
9 08/27/17

About

I want to be a screen/television writer
 

Reviews Erick Has Written

Abigail, Pilot Script 1 - Pilot

3 stars
September 01, 2017

Life in La La, Nicole's Original Draft

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Review of Life in La La

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
Premise:
3 stars
 
Story structure:
2 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
September 01, 2017
The premise reminds me of 30 Rock, but instead of being in New York it's in LA, and instead of already being a Television writer, the main character wants to be one. That's what the premise says, but there is no mention of it in the script. Liz doesn't really say why she moves to L.A other than "a fresh start" It needs to be longer, and I didn't feel hooked from the start. The characters are all right, but the major characters are usually all introduced in the pilot. The dialogue is good, and funny at times. The format of the script is all over the place, use Celtx or any free script writing software so you don't have to worry about formatting all of the time.
 

Foreseeable Video 1

4 stars
August 27, 2017

Murder by Moonlight Video 98 - Mystery

3 stars
August 27, 2017

Alluvion Video 1 - sci-fi

3 stars
August 27, 2017

Favorite Movies

The Exorcist, The Shining, It Follows, Little Miss Sunshine, Adaptation., Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind, The Truman Show, Spirited Away, Ghostbusters, Rushmore, Juno, The School of Rock, Full Metal Jacket, Drive, Life of Pi
 

Influences

Charlie Kaufman, Aaron Sorkin, Quentin Tarantino, Stanley Kubrick, David Fincher, The Coen Brothers, Noah Hawley
 

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