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America's Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String, Eugene's 1st Draft

1 out of 3 people found the following review helpful:

Tremendous

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
February 06, 2012
This script is a shining example of the originality that can be gleaned from taking well-known figures (in this case, the Founding Fathers) and putting them in all manner of action-hero situations. The result is equal parts thrilling, silly, and fun, with just enough tongue-in-cheek absurdity to keep it from collapsing upon itself.

There are nods to every conceivable genre in here -- historical, kung fu, western, science fiction, mad scientist, action, adventure, mystery, and of course, ninjas. British ninjas, of course. And who knew that Ben Franklin invented the Snuggie? He was a prolific inventor, after all. Who's to say he didn't?

An enjoyable, fast-paced adventure that will guarantee you never look at Betsy Ross quite the same way again.
 

Metalhead, Christopher's Original Draft

2 out of 2 people found the following review helpful:

A fun, old school ride!

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
5 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
April 04, 2011
 

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