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Movie Projects


Title Average Rating Downloads Date

America's Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String Paul's 1st Draft (Script 87)

No rating
16 01/31/12

ZvG: Zombies Vs Gladiators Paul's 1st Draft (Script 83)

4.0 stars
21 08/31/11

The Hour of Temptation Paul's 1st Draft (Script 2)

No rating
16 02/17/11


Winner 2007 Austin Film Festival Pitch Competition.

Winner 2006 Two Actors' Choice Awards Santa Fe Screenwriters' Conference

Winner 2010 Screenplay of the Month

Top 10% 2008 Nicholl Fellowship

UCLA Professional Program in Screenwriting 2007

MA Humanities University of Texas at Dallas 2003

Reviews Paul Has Written

My Three Boyfriends, Pilot Script 2 - Revised and mildly funnier version.

5 stars
Good job! I think this needs to go through the word processor one more time. Consider (V.O.) early-on instead of the gimmick at the end to clarify BF1 = emotion BF2 = physical BF3 = intellect.
June 27, 2016

My Three Boyfriends, Mini-bible 1 - My Three Boyfriends

5 stars
The concept is good and I like the title because it reminds me of "My Three Sons." I noticed a few fragmented sentences, which may or may not be okay for a formal presentation. Good characters.
June 27, 2016

Baby Not on Board, Pilot Script 1 - Unexpectedly Expecting

5 stars
Timely and thought-provoking! This script should get a lot of positive attention!
June 27, 2016

Baby Not on Board, Mini-bible 1 - BNOB Mini-Bible

5 stars
This show bible gave just enough information to pique one's interest. Well done!
June 27, 2016

The Adventures in Alcoholism: A Female's Guide to Drunken Debauchery , Pilot Script 1 - Hot In Hollywood

4 stars
Wow. I haven't done a review in a few years here and now it looks like I am reduced to 200 characters! I'd better not waste words! For single-camera the page-count is too long, Brooklyn 99 pilot 33
May 26, 2016

The Good People Video 1

5 stars
Loved the tone. Great music. Well done.
July 13, 2013

Favorite Movies

La Dolce Vita
28 Days Later
Forks Over Knives
Open City (1945)
Silence of the Lambs
Taxi Driver
Before Sunset
Fearless (Peter Weir)
Full Metal Jacket
The Getaway (1972)
Hiroshima Mon Amour
The Godfather


David Simon, hands down, is my primary influence. I respect the level of research he did to bring the characters of HOMICIDE, THE WIRE, and TREME to life. And I'm currently going through a Chuck Palahniuk phase, starting with his novel, FIGHT CLUB.


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