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ZvG: Zombies Vs Gladiators, Rick's 2nd Draft

3 out of 8 people found the following review helpful:

Two Thumbs Up!

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
4 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
July 12, 2011
Overall, this script is great!

Cons:
The story lacks in a few structural elements, but makes up for it. There are a few punctuation issues noted. There is a significant difference noted between the two action scenes.

Pros:
The story builds up and has an unexpected twist with the romantic ending. The presence of a supernatural being is seen in the relationship shown. The energy used in this script is a formula used a lot in other scripts, however, the writer has nicely used his imagination to bring an action packed "good guy v. bad guy" story together with an Ancient Rome setting.

Overall I say "TWO THUMBS UP"!
 

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