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Title Average Rating Downloads Date
Created

ZvG: Zombies Vs Gladiators A.T.'s 3rd Draft (Script 127)

No rating
67 08/31/11

ZvG: Zombies Vs Gladiators A.T.'s 2nd Draft (Script 108)

No rating
16 08/31/11

ZvG: Zombies Vs Gladiators A.T.'s 1st Draft (Script 29)

3.5 stars
(2)
48 08/09/11

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Grand Prize Winner of the 2009 Creative World Awards, Quarterfinalist in a number of other contests including the Nicholl Fellowships in '09. Optioned the same screenplay to an independent LA producer.

Here to gauge the scene and determine if I'm ready to throw one of my babies to the wolves.

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Reviews A.T. Has Written

ZvG: Zombies Vs Gladiators, Karl Peter's 1st Draft

2 out of 4 people found the following review helpful:

Not a Revision.

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
Premise:
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Story structure:
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Character:
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Dialogue:
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Emotion:
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July 29, 2011
I agree with Lauri.

I have a suspicion that this is just an original script of yours and you've entered it into this rewrite contest because it has some sort of resemblance in theme or the story occurs around the same time period.

I think the intention of this contest is to A.) prove you can work on a deadline B.) prove you can take studio notes and implement them accordingly and C.) prove you can enhance the original material.

You've accomplished A. But because it appears you've ignored B and C, the deadline doesn't really matter anyway. Because a studio wouldn't pay you to ignore their notes, write an unrelated script, and pretend it's somehow related to the original. That would get you fired (even though Charlie Kaufman actually did that with "Adaptation"... even he was almost fired, if you can believe that).

Long story short: put some zombies in there and you'll give this script a chance. Don't, and it'll have little to no chance of winning.
 

Favorite Movies

Good Will Hunting, Garden State, Almost Famous, Memento, anything Pixar, Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind, Thelma & Louise, Back to the Future, Jurassic Park, The Goonies, Sandlot, anything by the Coens, Rocky, and The Fountain? Yep.
 

Influences

The Coens, Tarantino, Scorcese, Goldman, Towne, Benioff, Gilroy, Chayefsky, Zemeckis, Kaufman, Callie Khouri, P.T.A., Allan Ball, Cameron Crowe, etc.
 

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