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America's Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String, Jason's 3rd Draft

0 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Make it more mature

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
2 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
3 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
August 19, 2011
This is a very good premise that would do well as a tv movie, but it needs to be more mature (I dont think that german hessians were giving each other teddy bears).
 

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