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Title Average Rating Downloads Date
Created

Public Eyes Alexis's Original Draft (Script 1)

No rating
11 09/06/12

About

I am very outgoing and have such a passion for the arts. Acting is my true passion. My acting idol at the moment would have to be Tom Hardy. He's such an underrated actor but is truly phenomenal in all the films he's in.
 

Reviews Alexis Has Written

Soul Legend, Bryan's Original Draft

0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Good Concept but needs work.

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
Premise:
4 stars
 
Story structure:
3 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
2 stars
 
February 27, 2012
I loved the premise before reading it but there were a lot of things that could have been fixed.
Just some grammatical errors like in the beginning when you say "these scientist" instead of "these scientists"
You never really introduced you're characters before they were talked about so I never got a mental image of each one.
The emotion didn't seem to be there because you didn't really describe how each character was feeling.
Loved the dialogue though, very unique and creative.
These were the only things that drew me away from the actual story so if you worked on this, this would be amazing!
 

America's Ben Franklin in: The Electrocution String, Antony's 1st Draft

0 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Amazing!

Overall Recommendation:
5 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
5 stars
 
Dialogue:
4 stars
 
Emotion:
5 stars
 
February 24, 2012
I absolutely loved this story and thought it was soooo inventive! I've never quite heard of a story like this but one wouldn't think it would be this clever of an idea to try. Enjoyed it throughout and really have nothing bad to say about it. Just brilliant! Good job!
 

A Place To Stay, H.'s 2nd Draft

0 out of 1 people found the following review helpful:

Not what I expected.

Overall Recommendation:
3 stars
 
Premise:
2 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
2 stars
 
Emotion:
4 stars
 
February 23, 2012
I enjoyed it but thought the opening scene was fairly slow and didn't really keep my attention but did grab it as I continued. The dialogue just seemed very typical and didn't seem like it was unique at all. Some of the things being said seemed very obvious that they were going to come next but good job. I did enjoy the way it was put together.
 

The Travelers - Earth, Lauren's 3rd Draft

0 out of 0 people found the following review helpful:

Very creative and inventive!

Overall Recommendation:
4 stars
 
Premise:
5 stars
 
Story structure:
4 stars
 
Character:
3 stars
 
Dialogue:
5 stars
 
Emotion:
3 stars
 
February 20, 2012
I can honestly say I've never read a script quite like this. The premise is very interesting and I was really intrigued throughout! Amazing job!
 

Favorite Movies

Warrior
The Dark Knight Rises
Lawless
Inception
XMen
X2:XMen United
XMen: The Last Stand
Van Helsing
Underworld
Star Wars 1, 2, and 3
Hellboy
Thor
Iron Man 1 + 2
Captain America
Transformers 1, 2 and 3
 

Influences

George Lucas for his amazing creativity.
Michael Bay for his amazing storytelling.
 

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